Hello! My name is Takashi. I’m belonging to international-culture course in Yamanashi university.
I’m writing graduation report about English poem now. It’s so difficult to write it, but it need to graduate from this university, so I’ll do my best.
My hobbies are listening to music and reading books and go shopping・・・・・etc.
Especially, I like listening to music very much. I spend much time to listen to music than watch TV in my free time. Sometimes I also go to the concert.
My hometown is Hakodate City in Hokkaido. I think Hakodate is very good place for sightseeing. There are lots of historical place like Goryoukaku, and delicious food.
In those, night view is the most popular and famous spot in Hakodate. I recommend seeing it from Hakodate Mountain. Maybe you will be touched by the beautiful scenery.
Please come to Hakodate if you have a enough time and good oppotunity!
I’m writing graduation report about English poem now. It’s so difficult to write it, but it need to graduate from this university, so I’ll do my best.
My hobbies are listening to music and reading books and go shopping・・・・・etc.
Especially, I like listening to music very much. I spend much time to listen to music than watch TV in my free time. Sometimes I also go to the concert.
My hometown is Hakodate City in Hokkaido. I think Hakodate is very good place for sightseeing. There are lots of historical place like Goryoukaku, and delicious food.
In those, night view is the most popular and famous spot in Hakodate. I recommend seeing it from Hakodate Mountain. Maybe you will be touched by the beautiful scenery.
Please come to Hakodate if you have a enough time and good oppotunity!
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Hello Takashi! This is David Murcko. Your hometown sounds very interesting. If I can go to Japan, maybe I can visit your town (^_^).
It sounds wonderful. I would love to visit some historical sites of Japan and maybe visit a hot spa. I'm sure your city is wonderful to gaze at during the nighttime. I would like to see pictures, if you wouldn't mind (^_^).
What kind of music do you listen to? I listen to quite a bit of stuff. What type of music would you recommend for someone who enjoys Rock? Also what concerts have you been to? I have seen Blink 182, The Offspring, Incubus, Green Day and Red Hot chili peppers live. They were amazing.
Your English is very good. Impressive. I have a few suggestions for you. Instead of saying "I spend much time to listen to music than watch TV in my free time" it would be easier to say "I spend more free time listening to music rather than watching TV." Also, when you say "Sometimes I also go to the concert" It may be a little confusing for some. If you said "Sometimes, I like to go to concerts." It's much easier to read.
I hope you like my suggestions, you are doing very well, keep it up.
Hope to talk to you soon.
Hey Takashi! My name is Saya Toita. I like to listen to music too! What are some of your favorite bands in both Japan and America?
I have one question. What is "Goryoukaku"? Can you please explain to me what that is??? Thank You!
Your english is very good!
Saya
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